Here I have collected together some feedback on the DVD cover I designed, I asked 7 members of my target audience to comment on the positives and negatives of the cover. They also helped me with suggesting improvements I can make so that it is more appealing to my chosen audience.
‘I like how the image is split into sections to show the
different time periods however, I feel that it looks rather busy and cluttered.
You could improve this by keeping the background images simple so that the
focus is on the characters.’
‘I feel that compared to the busy and eye-catching image the
title of the program looks quite boring and plain. Maybe you colour redesign
some aspects of the logo to make it more eye-catching and memorable.’
‘I like the characters different costumes on the cover as it
clearly show the different time periods they are traveling to. I like the main image
on the cover however; I think it over powers the title slightly’.
‘I am not keen on the red background behind the text; I think
that it distracts you from the title of the program. To improve this you could
try using a duller colour maybe a grey or maroon, just so that the focus is on
the title and image.’
‘I like how there is a girl and a boy character so that it
appeals to both boys and girls. However, I think the red background may put
some boys off as they associate it with girls. Maybe you could use a darker red
that isn’t so stereotypical’.
‘I feel that the title is overpowered by the main image, to
improve maybe you could change the layout of the DVD cover so that the title is
at the top which makes it stand out more.’
‘I like the DVD cover I think that it is appealing to people
of my age as the characters are a similar age. I also like the time travelling
theme as it is fun and interesting to look at their costumes’.
To conclude
Many children commented on the contrast between the busy
image and plain logo, when making my real DVD cover I will take this into account
and as one child suggested I may have to change the layout. Many children also
commented on the red background stating that it distracted them for the main image;
I will also take this factor into account and will experiment with colours that
will suit the cover better. When designing my DVD cover I will take this audience
feedback into account as it is crucial for making sure that my DVD cover looks
professional and appealing to my target audience.
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